Sunday, August 21, 2016

refugee crises

                              refugee crises    
In Syria in the middle east countries 4 million people fled their countrybecouse of the civil wars. 
If you want to know why refugees civil war started,then keep reading. 
Those civil wars all happening because all people people in Syria are no longer listening to there dictators because of them dying in salvation and disease. 

 23 million people had been forced from thier home to move.millions of people have risk their lives to cross the Mediterranean sea. 



            
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 23, 2016 at 12:13 AM

    Hi Jeremiah,

    Great information. Your information isn't in order. Please look at Kymani's Refugee Crisis explanation on his blog and see if your writing matches his. Also, make sure capital letters are in the correct place.

    Mr O'Connor

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  2. AnonymousAugust 23, 2016 at 7:04 PM

    Hi Jeremiah,

    I can't see that you followed my feedback. Can you find a buddy to help you organise your ideas properly please. Ask William or Kymani.

    Mr O'Connor

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  3. AnonymousAugust 28, 2016 at 3:14 PM

    NICE!!! WORK!!!:-)

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