There was mouth watering chocolate flowing like a river into the tunnel.I could smell the delicious chocolate floating down the river,we saw a giant pink shinny boat coming towards us,we saw Oompa-Loompas haply singing and dancing as they had fun.We boarded the boat,it was so sparkly I nearly ad an head ache.
Great descriptive language Jeremiah. PLease make sure that you've got capital letters in the right place.
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